She knew she had been broken as soon as she had woken up. With a tube pressing down inside her throat in a haze of drugs and confusion and pain, all she could focus on was the emptiness. Somehow. She just ended at the neck. Everything below was both her and not her. After three months, she was going home. Things weren't so simple anymore, not would they ever be. Correction, everything was simple, but nothing was easy. There had been so many things that had taken some getting used to, but it wasn't so bad. She had acclimated to the ever-persistent hiss and puff of her ventilator pretty quickly. Eventually, it had become comforting. The sound of it stopping would've given her a heart attack. It might've taken her a little more time to get used to the way she spoke. How her voice fell as the air ran out in between the "breaths" of the vent and the words dried up in her mouth. How soft her voice was even though it had gotten quite raspy. When she first woke up in the hospital, it was
Seeing some of the people I watch experiment with AI has given me some motivation to give it a go. I'm still not completely convinced, but is interesting.
I have fixed the entries for Unfinished Story Week as for some reason comments were disabled (no pun intended) on some of my posts. No idea why this happened but it is fixed now. Very interested to hear your comments and feedback.
I was planning to wait until next week to start posting some of my unifinished stories, but since it is the Easter weekend and I've got a few days off I thought I would begin early as a Good Friday treat. My first story will be posted later and then I'll be posting a new unfinished story every day for a week. Please remember that these stories are incomplete - some of them were written many years ago and sadly I doubt any of them will ever get finished but I would like to think there is still some value in them. Let me know what you think, vote for the story you think should be continued and I hope this week serves as a reminder that even an unfinished piece of writing can be fun to share. ~ Quadlad